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So you want to write?
[ SUNDAY, SEPTEMBER 19, 2004 12:00:30 AM ]
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Word
factory:
One of the most important and challenging aspects of a script is
its length. Everything I've ever written (except for Dr Babasaheb Ambedkar) has
been under 120 pages – the norm for international screenplays.
It's like a haiku or sonnet. Whatever needs to be said must be said
within these parameters. Rule of thumb – one page translates into one
minute of screen time. So, a 120-page script gives you a film with a running
time of 120 minutes. This gets whittled down further, to about 90 pages when it
is time for the shooting
script.
Show, don't tell:
Try
to narrate the story in images rather than lengthy dialogue. For example, a
scene from Salaam Bombay – where we needed to convey that eight-year-old
Manju is jealous of the older Solasaal, who she thinks has usurped her friend
Chaipau's affection.
Instead of expressing her jealousy in dialogue,
this is how it was written: Chaipau asks Manju to deliver a packet of biscuits
to Solasaal. Manju does so, but outside Solasaal's room, instead of giving her
the biscuits she gobbles up the entire packet.
Mira's direction to
Hansa, who played Manju was to eat the biscuits imagining that she was eating up
Solasaal. She did it perfectly. The audience got it.
The plot thickens:
A good
script is a combination of a strong story (plot) and interesting characters.
It's like a tree – where the plot forms the trunk and the characters are
the branches and leaves. Without the spine, the tree can't stand and devoid of
branches, the tree would be ugly and uninteresting.
Free flow:
You can either
map out the entire story in an outline form and then follow the outline as you
write, or you can let the story flow as you write it. (Sometimes
directors/producers/financiers insist on an initial outline).
I find
following a map boring. I also believe it cuts you off from the interesting
possibilities and surprises that always emerge in the actual writing.
I like to have a general idea of the story in my head when I begin.
Then I outline small segments at a time, a mini-map that changes as the writing
progresses.
Money:
In India,
I am told that compensation for scripts varies depending on whether you write
the story, screenplay, dialogues – since each screenplay is fragmented
into different jobs done by different writers.
I've heard that
payments can vary from Rs 1 lakh to Rs 25 lakh. Writers in India can and should
register their scripts with the Film Writers'
Association.
How to break in:
Meet directors with your ideas/scripts and hope that one of them
'discovers' you. Or go the film school route. In America and the UK, one person
writes everything – story, dialogues – called the screenplay.
In the US, one can and should register scripts with the Writers'
Guild of America (WGA). The registration is open to all, regardless of
nationality, and one can do it online from India too.
Adaptations:
I believe in
respecting the original, re-imagining it for a different medium. I have a
bookmark that says 'Never judge a book by its film'. Unfortunately, many times
this is true.
Adapting a novel is a paradox. You have to preserve
its richness and density while simultaneously cutting it down to a fraction of
its original length. I've been fortunate to have adapted some brilliant books,
which makes my job easier as well as harder.
Easier, as the story, the
characters, the dialogue are already all there. Harder as there's such an
embarrassment of riches – what to keep, what to cut?
Page one:
Over the past 19
years, I've written more than 19 scripts and facing the first blank page never
gets easier. It's the hardest part of writing for me.
However, if
you keep at it, the car does accelerate and soon hopefully you'll be flying down
the Mumbai's Pune Expressway. It's important not to give
up.
Rewrites:
All the scripts
I've written that have become films, have gone into seven drafts each.
Sometimes, scriptwriting is endless rewriting. Each time you have to summon up
the enthusiasm, even though you are reworking the same repeatedly.
If you're bored, it will show on the page. If you are blessed, the
script will get made.
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